Can someone constrauct this better ?

The guidebook “Lonely Planet” has become a favourite guide to hundreds of thousands travelers around the world. According to this guidebook Bulgaria is among the tenth most attractive destinations for trips in 2010. The articles focus primary on hiking trails among the Bulgarian nature, preserved traditions, and addresses for accommodation at sea and the mountains. Preferable are developed for the purpose of tourism cottages. They offer different experience from the usual hotels- the feeling of home comfort and warmth. At the same time prices in these oases of peace and quiet are fully accessible to every pocket. No wonder that this type of accommodation is becoming increasingly sought-after alternative.
The way you will be welcomed in guest houses is different from the impersonal atmosphere of the hotel reception. Forget the empty look of distracted administrator, grumpy maid or phlegmatic waiter at the restaurant who can not serve properly. If you decide to stay at a guest house, you will be taken care of as a VIP person. Here the hosts look forward and hope each client. The hosts believe that the client will be pleased and he will come back again with friends. Do not be surprised if the hosts invite you to have lunch or have dinner with them or only to drink home made wine and chat as you are friends or relatives. To give you pleasure they will make such a feast which you will remember for a long time. And the next day they will offer walking around, picking herbs, fishing and other entertainments.

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  1. The guidebook “Lonely Planet” has become a favourite guide for hundreds of thousands of travelers around the world.

    According to this guidebook, Bulgaria is among the tenth most attractive destinations for trips in 2010.

    The articles focus primarily on hiking trails, preserved traditions, and seaside and mountain accommodations.

    Preferable lodgings are those cottages developed for the purpose of tourism.

    They offer a different experience from the usual, that is, the feeling of home comfort and warmth.

    At the same time, the price range in these oases of peace and quiet are fully accessible to every pocket.

    No wonder this type of accommodation is becoming an increasingly sought-after alternative.

    The manner in which you will be welcomed in guest houses is strikingly different from the impersonal atmosphere of a hotel.

    Forget the empty look of a distracted administrator, grumpy maid, or phlegmatic, in-house restaurant waiter.

    If you decide to stay at a guest house, the care you receive will be similar to that of a VIP.

    Here, the hosts look forward to the meeting and stay of each client.

    The hosts strive to assure the pleasure of the client in hopes of his return with friends.

    Do not be surprised if they invite you to have lunch or dinner with them, or perhaps to share in a chat over a glass of homemade wine as if you are a friend or relative.

    For your pleasure alone, they will provide you with a feast which you will remember for a long time.

    The following day, they will suggest the relaxation of walking around, picking herbs, fishing and many other pleasurable entertainments.

    I typed each sentence separately so you may better notice the changes I suggested and the small corrections in punctuation.

    Titles of books are underlined. I realize Y!A does not provide this typing option, but be sure to underline the title in your own work.

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